Sunday, June 23, 2013

IMAGINING THE HAPPY ENDING...

THE REAL ENDING
          Paris is having a ritual inside the tomb by spreading flowers to Juliet's dead body. He saw a man walking towards the tomb holding a torch so he hid himself in the darkness. Romeo and Balthasar came and Romeo gave a letter to Balthasar to be given to his father. He gave Balthasar the money and asked him to not to say anything about his actions. He also asked Balthasar to go. Balthasar hid himself outside and slept. 
          Romeo opened the tomb with his tools and that's where Paris saw that it is Romeo. He said that Romeo should go out because he will only do something bad. Romeo said that he doesn't want to do another crime and asked Paris to just go out. Paris didn't accept the request and they fought. Paris died. Romeo saw Juliet and he thought that she was dead because it was Balthasar's news. He kissed Juliet and drank the poison he bought in the pharmacy before he went to the tomb. The poison worked quickly and Romeo died. 
         Friar Lawrence saw a light coming from the tomb. He saw Balthasar and asked him to go with him inside. Balthasar said that he cannot because Romeo thought that he already went home. Friar Lawarence saw Paris and Romeo dead. That's when Juliet became alive again because the potion that Friar Lawrence only makes a person dead for 40 hours. Friar Lawrence heard a noise so he said to Juliet that they should go now and he will make her a nun. Juliet said that Friar Lawrence can go and leave her inside. When Friar Lawrence was gone, she saw the poison that Romeo drank and she kissed him hoping that there's still poison in his lips. When nothing happened, she heard the watchmen coming so she saw Romeo's dagger and she killed herself.
         The watchmen came and saw the three dead. They called the Prince, the Capulets and the Montagues. That's when Friar Lawrence told the whole story and the two families became good to each other. The Capulets made a statue for Romeo while the Montagues made a statue for Juliet.


MY OWN ENDING
           Paris is having a ritual inside the tomb by spreading flowers to Juliet's dead body. He saw a man walking towards the tomb holding a torch so he hid himself in the darkness. Romeo and Balthasar came and Romeo gave a letter to Balthasar to be given to his father. He gave Balthasar the money and asked him to not to say anything about his actions. He also asked Balthasar to go. Balthasar hid himself outside and slept. 
          Romeo opened the tomb with his tools and that's where Paris saw that it is Romeo. He asked Romeo why he was there and Romeo told him that Juliet was his wife. Paris understood what's happening so he just left saying that he still loves Juliet but he just thought that there's still a woman for him. When Romeo was about to drink the poison, Juliet hugged him and said that he should not do that. Romeo was shocked but he also hugged Juliet. They kissed. The watchmen entered and saw that Juliet was alive. The were shocked but the immediately grabbed Romeo because they thought that he will do something bad to her. Juliet asked the watchmen to release Romeo. That's when the Prince, Capulets, and Montagues came. The Capulets were shocked to see that Juliet was alive. That's the time when Friar Lawrence told the whole story and the two families said sorry to each other and they promised to be good to each other and no to be a barrier to the love of the two lovers. Juliet and Romeo had 3 children while Paris saw the woman that is right for him. ~END


        

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